Making poems out of tweets by messing with line length!
One of our prompts last semester was to “test the integrity and possible effects of lines, try out as many free verse versions of a prose sentence as you can think of.” Rather than trying to come up with all new poems for the sake of the prompt, I thought it would be more fun to use text that wasn’t necessarily meant to be poetic and turn it into a poem by messing with the line length.
Since I was looking for a collection of short, random source blocks, Twitter seemed like the obvious choice; I scrolled through my tweets from that week and picked a handful to mess with. I used the provided hashtags as titles (for those that had them) and created hashtag titles for those that didn’t. I messed with case a little bit but left the words exactly as they were and, other than removing any emoticons, I only made minor punctuation changes.
Overall I like how the poems came out, but some definitely worked better than others. I found it interesting how you could change the rhythm of the statement in drastic ways just by cutting a thought short or letting it run on.
Original tweet: wha? It’s fruit juice mixed with sparkling water and it helps with my thirst just fine
#ilikemyjuicejustfine
wha?
it’s fruit juice mixed with sparkling water
and
it helps MY thirst
just fine
Original tweet: Should be doing homework but I’m wiped so I’m gonna go to bed and yell at myself in the morning for being lazy
#itslikeicanseethefuture
should be doing homework
but
I’m wiped
so
I’m gonna go to bed and yell at myself
in the morning
for being lazy
Original tweet: My friend and I laughed hysterically & saw actual past behavior echoed in the main characters’. Clearly we are the target demographic. #Paul
#paul
my friend and I laughed
hysterically
and
saw actual past behavior
echoed
in the main characters’.
clearly
we
are
the
target
demographic.
Original tweet: Gaa! “… as compelling AS yesterday’s”… Stupid thumbs! Learn English more gooder! You’re embarrassing me
#shamedthumbs
gaa!
“as compelling AS yesterday’s”
…
Stupid.
Thumbs.
Learn English more gooder…
You’re embarrassing me
This was a fun idea!
The stupid thumbs sounded like me.
Is this Sarah Chavis who attended UC Davis? I would love to catch up with you.
-Kim
Yes?